Anxiety
Mid night
A jungle trail
Gentle light, just enough
From
Moon above,
Heart praising
Cool…
Beautiful….
From nowhere a thick cloud drifts in
Covering moon,
Vulgar darkness is consuming.
Will I last
Till
Clouds pass??
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12 comments:
hie harshad..
its a beautiful post...
thanks for visiting my blog and those lovely comments..
That's small and so beautifully phrased.
Will I last Till Clouds pass??
beautiful!
The last line grips my heart and won't let go... makes me want to reach into the darkness...
My 3ww offering for the week.
Great usage of the three words. Very descriptive in such few words too.
-Tim
Enjoyed the sudden creeping in of potential danger. Good work!
those are some powerful words
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simple in its construction, but this has a depth to it.
I LOVE AND ADORE SKY
BUT CLOUDS DON'T MAKE ME CRY
BECAUSE WHEN THEY MELT AWAY
I GAZE AT A CLEARER SKY..
HARSHAD JI ONLY FOR YOU FROM MY BOOK " A LITTLE MORE THAN ORDINARY"
YOU WILL LAST, CLOUDS WON'T..AND WE BOTH KNOW THIS..WE ARE WORK IN PROGRESS TO CREATE A BETTER WORLD AROUND US..WITH US..
beautiful poem
yes you will.. remember the silver lining.
Excellent concise post.
Yes, you will! A lovely description of the night and the delight the moon can give one. The metaphor of a dark cloud covering up that light is so menacing! You captured the feeling well.
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