Monday, July 26, 2010

Encounter

Encounter




Sparks ignited as eyes met

Lightning strikes

It is over in moments.






Note : This is my first attempted Haiku.

10 comments:

Vinay Leo R. said...

wow harshad ji, lovely.. the eyes meeting and in moments one falls in love..

blown away by the wordplay! :)

welcome to Haiku Heights. hope to see u next Sunday too :) u can also suggest topics, i'll take them up on random basis for future prompts. :D

Sandra.if said...

eyes met...I love that!

The Enchantress said...

ufff..
lightning did actually strike..
lovely words..

Beyond said...

over in moments :( may be the spark remains :)

Amity said...

beautiful first attempt! I could feel!!!
keep joining!!!

* મારી રચના * said...

Beautiful...!! i like it..

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Harshad, this is beautiful. Thanks for stopping by. I have been away and will soon be posting poems again.


Melanie

Saumya said...

wow....just a few words...but what an impact....great!

Anonymous said...

bahut khub harshad sir.....
beautiful eye...
bahut dino se aapke blog par nahi aa saka ...
maafi chahunga......

Locomente said...

First haiku??
I cant belive that...
Cz its toooo GOOD!!!