Sunday, November 14, 2010

Echoes


(  ( (  (((  E c h o e s  ))) ) )  )


Whisper so low,
Almost feeling and not voice.
Always playing
As if continuous echoes
Of flowing stream in a valley,
Heard clearly
In my silent moments,
Guiding me to walk
Path that lead to
Space Within.


……Many times not in the direction
That logically led to
Actions
Excitement
And immediate success.

--
OSI Prompt: Echoes

14 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Good morning, Harshadji.. and the path leads to Space Within in the direction of peace, joy and tranquility.. what else can one pray for.. Its always a pleasure to visit SPACE WITHIN.. Thanks for the wisdom..

The Dark Lord said...

Wonderful poetry.. a feel of the tranquil; expresses a lot in a mere few words.. a great read..

shail said...

Beautiful... the thought of a gentle guiding voice that walks you to that space within.

indicaspecies said...

In the silence of your walk within your space, there must be so much serenity, and your own little celebration!

Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Anonymous said...

your words are subtle and beautiful!!

Anonymous said...

I think I was confused about your remark...now I think you refer to the content...:)

Amity said...

Terrific Space Within Harshad...and you created a beautiful echo in here, worthy of expressing your innate talent!

Loved the echoes of your words>....

Anonymous said...

thanks so much for your words...closing may have a meaning you are right!!

Teresa said...

Love that line "almost feeling and not voice". Very beautiful.

Patti said...

So very true- I feel the echoes may eventually lead there though but not always when we want

WritingsForLife said...

ah beautiful :). We all need to be in touch with our spaces within :-)

SuziCate said...

a nice serene take on echoes.

Anonymous said...

vivid demonstration of echoes.