Sunday, July 31, 2011

One Single Impression : Uncomfortable Encounter


One Single Impression: Uncomfortable encounter

The lady was very nice to her
She too reciprocated
But not relaxed,
Having encroached on her exclusive rights
Feeling guilty

More so
After the lady said
"I too worked as his secretary,
Before we got married."
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Written for OSI Prompt : Uncomfortable

10 comments:

Unknown said...

Those last two lines tell the whole story, don't they?!

Ramesh Sood said...

Indeed very uncomfortable situation..handled and expressed so comfortably..great.. God Bless!!

Anonymous said...

I like that...!!

Jim said...

This is a very uncomfortable place to be, Harshod. I was not expecting this.
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SandyCarlson said...

The stories we don't tell. Love it!

PremI said...

Truly a terribly uncomfortable encounter, in a nutshell.
Of course bitter and painful...should not happen with any woman!

Nanka said...

So apt for the prompt and well done!!

ZEAL said...

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The lady showed all her generosity as a human being and politely warned or requested also not to proceed further. Hope the other woman will understand .

A very unfortunate situation indeed !

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Patti said...

That was good storytelling- nicely done! Uncomfortable indeed!

gsb3 said...

Great story that hits the point exactly. You could not be more uncomfortable than that!