Tuesday, September 20, 2011

A plea


A plea


When I am not,
Love is.


When I am there,
Betrayal can be.


Please forgive me
or
Cast first stone at me.

--

OSI Prompt : Betrayal

7 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Few words say it all.. Harshadji..

Patti said...

Oh I like this! Well done!

renegadeword said...

This is so true. Focusing too much on the self can be so detrimental to all sorts of relationships. On the other hand, "not being" and not taking into account or standing up for one's own needs is problematic, too...

SandyCarlson said...

I like this, too. And I know the feeling.

Anonymous said...

that is courage!!

Jim said...

Nicely put, Harshad. Love conquers all.
My guy ended up in prison after he betrayed his 'friend.'
Stoning ends up in death, does it not?
..

Anonymous said...

H. your poem is stunning in its
simplicity and truth.