Sunday, May 13, 2012

Blushing



Looking down
Hiding passion
Scared little, more excited
Not wanting to say no, afraid to say yes
Waiting for a move



She lifted eyelids slowly
To find what he holds in his eyes but
Dropped it quickly
To hide what she holds in her own,
Heart beating loud
Color of her face
Said it all.
--
OSI Prompt : Crimson Red

12 comments:

Geraldine said...

a crimson moment captured...

Ramesh Sood said...

Crimson, that!!! What a blush..lovely.. A beautiful poem, this!!

RS:)

anthonynorth said...

A moment beautifully expressed in words.

Sankara Jayanth S said...

very beautifully written.. the picture wasn't needed, the poem painted one while i read.. lovely..!

Bruce Miller said...

A wonderful true to life story in just a few choice lines of poetry!

Jack Greening said...

No picture needed, the poem tells the story of passing crimsom thoughts.

Sri Valli said...

Wow....What a beautiful poem!!....Girl/Woman feelings...captured very well :)

gautami tripathy said...

Indeed!

conversing with the fire

Jim said...

Days of old here, Harshad. There is much feeling in your poem, I can feel her heart beating and share her blush!
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Anu said...

beautiful poem sir ... very nicely expressed !!

SandyCarlson said...

Ah, seduction...! Beautiful.

Anonymous said...

so sweet..!!